More and more people are now considering wearing fashionable clothes very important. Is it positive or negative?
In recent years, people's opinions about clothing has changed extremely. Some claim that wearing fashionable wardrobes is important. The rest believes that such trend can have negative impact on society.
On the one hand, being fashionable has positive influence on people thinking and confidence boost. In particular, people who prefer to wear recent fashions feel more confident and can easily attract others to their actions and ideas. As a direct result, they even might become role models for population. Secondly, style of clothing shows person's reputation and social state. For instance, if you someone who wears expensive clothes you might think that this person is rich and now enjoying his life. Thirdly the clothes shows progressive nature for examples some employees start dressing same like their seniors it shows that they want to reach to their seniors post and even progress further.
On the other hand, most of the people who are interested in fashionable clothing is youngest. Not secret that people at their young age can not afford themselves to buy such expensive clothes. Consequently, they will make their parents to do it instead of them which will put families economic situation in worse place. Additionally, It can also lead to people losing their own persona and style. That is, if all people buy and wear the same brands, people will soon lose their individuality.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that wearing fashionable wardrobes can have positive impact on people's psychological state and will make them more self-confident. However, it is important to mentioning that as a result of this trend people may lose their own style.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22388059701 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67610681253 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589552238806 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1048819414 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1875 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287408140315 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945547105654 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073173214943 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181983359602 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351505626896 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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