Over the half century, the pace of changes in the life of human beings has increased beyond the expectations. Private cars, methods of transportation have been driven by the innovation of technology and science. The prospects of this transportation method create traffic congestion and traffic jams during the rush hours. In this essay, I will discuss the problems created by private cars with salient solution that can be taken cope with problems.
To embark with, the improvement of technology is at booming breakthrough an the private cars which were produced to save the time of individuals which have now the enormous proportion. The traffic jams and traffic congestion are forged by the number of motor vehicles. For example, a recent study revealed that the traffic jams on the road created by private cars have become more contentious that the past.
Moreover, the air pollution is also created by the private cars. Most of the people purchase cars to reach short distances on regular basis rather than commuting by buses and trains. The exhausts of the private cars release the pollution at massive rate. Consequently, it will affect the ambiance and ozone layer its hole is getting expand. Similarly, it will also lead to respiratory problems and health problems due to the air pollution. For instance, a heading of Mexico Times revealed that the number of private cars is reduced by the Australian government because of the higher cases of breathing problems in Australian citizen.
Finally, the most predominant solution of this problem is that government should allocate a substantial part from its annual revenue to improve public transportation, constructing new roads and repairing old ones. These steps can be resulted in the reduction of private vehicles. To cite an example, a study revealed that in Canada the development of public transportation is at peak. Public transportation provides better service to people. Furthermore, a huge tax should be applied on petrol and gases as a result people will prefer public transportation.
To conclude, it can be seen that private motors create number of health and environmental problems which found perilous and that can only be eliminated by applying taxes and building new roads.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, similarly, so, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24033149171 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91645862298 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527624309392 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0109585887 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8421052632 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0526315789 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226053905128 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657968674779 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447323788141 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118756908852 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290923635854 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.