More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation, Describe some of the problems over reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
On the one hand, when people are too dependent on using personal cars as the main means of transportation, traffic congestion is the most serious consequence. According to a report by TomTom, a company specializing in traffic and navigation services of the Netherlands, cities such as Moscow, Los Angeles, Mexico, and especially istanbul in Turkey are the cities with high traffic congestion rates. worst rush hour in the world. every year, road users in istanbul spend 125 hours in the middle of the road. On the other hand, this not only leads to personal effects such as commuting and working time of each person, but it also leads to another serious consequence, which is the increased risk of environment">environmental pollution. high. The more people rely on means of transportation such as personal cars, buses, motorbikes, the greater the amount of waste and dust emitted. this not only leads to affecting people's health, such as liver and lung problems or asthma-related diseases, or forming traffic accidents because the roads are full of traffic. people, but it also has a great impact on our earth. today, the increasing global warming is also due to the invisible impact of humans that we do not think about its incalculable consequences.
So, we need to be able to solve this situation. First of all, the government's job is to be the one to stand up and call on people or have directives and propaganda to prevent the release of monkey waste from affecting the environment. this is not easy at all because not everyone will listen and follow, so superiors need to tighten up on this issue. next, because the main cause leading to the above effects is man-made. Therefore, the most reasonable solution is in the attitude of each person. If they knew that they were the culprits causing environment">environmental pollution or traffic accidents, perhaps they would have learned their own lesson. today, every family should know how to teach their children, not only the lessons in class but also the personality of each person in society. Not only teaching how to be nice to people, but also teaching how to be kind to the environment, the earth. The transmission of life skills to children, the next generation, although not able to have much impact on the world at the moment, but I firmly believe that it will have an effect on the environment in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 400, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Worst
...ies with high traffic congestion rates. worst rush hour in the world. every year, roa...
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Line 1, column 400, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the worst'.
Suggestion: the worst
...ies with high traffic congestion rates. worst rush hour in the world. every year, roa...
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Line 1, column 430, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Every
...on rates. worst rush hour in the world. every year, road users in istanbul spend 125 ...
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Line 1, column 742, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: High
...ironment'>environmental pollution. high. The more people rely on means of trans...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...r the amount of waste and dust emitted. this not only leads to affecting peoples hea...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
... because the roads are full of traffic. people, but it also has a great impact on our ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Today
...t also has a great impact on our earth. today, the increasing global warming is also ...
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Suggestion: This
...y waste from affecting the environment. this is not easy at all because not everyone...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Next
...riors need to tighten up on this issue. next, because the main cause leading to the ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Today
...ey would have learned their own lesson. today, every family should know how to teach ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92803970223 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33587737746 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54094292804 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6168290793 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3888888889 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.092982441852 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.029161431057 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410066032776 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695989093981 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0108147849944 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.