As people’s way of living has changed, diseases attacking on them have also changed. As a result, the number of individuals suffering from such diseases are increasing day by day. It is believed by few people that conventional methods of cure can be a solution. Although, the benefits of traditional medicine cannot be underestimated, I am of the opinion that the health problems of modern age Can be better with latest medical techniques.
On the one hand, The conventional methods of curing can be advantageous in many cases. Such as, due to High stress from work, People are often diagnosed with Insomnia. To deal with this disease, An old technique called acupuncture is still popular among Modern societies. Also, The different kinds of herbs are used to treat illness naturally as well as they are used in cosmetics to manufacture organic products.
On the other hand, Most of modern diseases Can only be treated with up-to-date Medicines. In past, Modern diseases have killed millions of people due to unavailability of latest medicine. Cholera And plague Were major among others. In addition, different types of cancer are mostly curable due to developed technology of medicine. The famous businessman Bill Gates Who also Charity a lot of money to Medicine around the world, Describes in a video clip that modern medicines have saved Countless lives. Hence, it is evident that Modern diseases are better treated with modern medicine.
In conclusion, I agree that natural methods of treating diseases could be helpful in some cases but most of the time modern illness can only be treated with modern medicine.
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- More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged To what extend do you agree 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
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Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...illions of people due to unavailability of latest medicine. Cholera And plague Were major...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in many cases, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13909774436 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82377878201 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3744127715 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317140015353 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101980282661 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815599368268 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206964474804 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516982539016 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.