more and more people are suffring from helth problams coused bg a modren life style which can not be trated with modren madicien , some people think that return to traditional medicien should be encorage , do you agry or sic agree
In this contemporary epoch, people are leading to many health related issues. modern treatments can not cure that diseases. A group of individuals said that humans should replace modern medicines by traditional medicines. I completely agree with this notion.
To begin with, nowadays people are suffering from more chronic health diseases because of plethora of reasons. The first and foremost cause is eating unhealthy food like fast food, cola, and so on. Cholesterol level is high in these type of food and human beings do not perform any kind of physical exercise and activity. As a result, they lead to sedentary lifestyle and get uncontrollable diseases like cancer and diabetes.
Furthermore, people prefer old type of medicines by allopathic treatments since modern medicines have side effects on another organs of body and person using these addictive to particular diseases. Whereas traditional medicines were made by herbal plants that vanish roots of particular disease and did not affect any part of body. For example, the roots of turmeric plant are helpful to remove whole cancer cells from body and do not have any harmful effect. Thus, allopathic treatments are replaced by traditional methods of cure.
Above evidences have led me to conclude that veteran type of medicines are helpful for us and do not have any kind of injurious disaster to any part of the body while allopathic medicines have disastrous consequences on health and people are addictive by these pills. Therefore, mankind should return to traditional medicines by replacing modern treatments.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much health', 'a good deal of health'.
Suggestion: much health; a good deal of health
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Modern
... leading to many health related issues. modern treatments can not cure that diseases. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... more chronic health diseases because of plethora of reasons. The first and forem...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lt, they lead to sedentary lifestyle and get uncontrollable diseases like cancer ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for example, kind of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32669322709 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76177528768 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581673306773 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.7066826675 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1318454774 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495996950712 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378252400962 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831439484764 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226122153652 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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