Now-a-days, working from home is becoming increasingly popular. Some people think it's beneficial for employees and their families while other argue that it causes stress at home. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and explain my support for latter view.
There are many advantages of working at home, it's useful for employee and family as it gives flexibility to work as per convenience. This is because there is no need to follow the office hour schedule. As a result, choosing to work from home gives benefit of spending time with family and help in house hold needs which improves relationship among family members with extra care which overall increases the productivity of work.
On the other hand, for many reasons, I believe working from home is more stressful and create tension among the family members. Firstly, the time to complete the work is more than the usual hours which is the major reasons of fight among the family. Secondly, a corner of the house needs to be reserved everytime as any meeting can be held online. Best internet connection should be there. The employer should be connected everytime with the colleague's for all updates.
To recapitulate, although working from home has many benefits of convenience of working and opportunity to save time and money of travelling but it leads to create tensed situation in the family
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 349, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Best'.
Suggestion: The Best
...time as any meeting can be held online. Best internet connection should be there. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, while, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98268398268 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5894322155 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597402597403 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1221304546 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9166666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297093466901 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101765637366 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823187753843 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181439487183 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858672233265 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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