Working is an important aspect for survival in the consumerism world. Some people recognise the beneficial side of this situation, while others feel it as stress for families. I shall articulate both the views I'm the forth coming paragraphs before concluding any personal opinion.
On the brighter side, a major benefit that have been seen in working from home is that employers can save their time and can spend some quality and leisure time with family or friends. With this, the bond can become much stronger. One another benefit of this trend is that the money which has been consumed by travelling can also be saved and can utilise that amount in such useful activities such as donating that extra amount to charity house or in an orphanage. Due to this, the needy people can get some help. Hence, working home is beneficial.
On the contrary, sustainable proportion of individual believe that working from home is problematic for families. As, it creates disturbance in the family environment. The other aspect which affect negatively is for the employers who belong to mediocre families. Working from home needs internet and other facilities such as laptop to create graphics, wireless connection to work for longer hours without any interruption. These needs may create financial crises and brings critical conditions in families. Therefore, this trend affects negatively.
In conclusion, from the above discussion, I conclude that working from home has more negative impact than positive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, may, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2531120332 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69241854317 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609958506224 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.1937999739 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0666666667 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28614520591 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887106297939 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540996956572 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167656173482 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267752819492 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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