There is no doubt that there has been an increase in people who are not only working at home but also learning at home due to the advancement of technology. While some individuals of the society think that it leads to few drawbacks for masses, I also argue that using cutting-edge technology has manifold benefits to the society especially those who are belonging to the rural areas.
There is a considerable benefit of working at home is that it opens up new vistas of employment for inhabitants who are living in rural community and they can initiate their work from home with the use of electronic devices in order to earn sufficient income without going in urban areas. To be more specific, the small-town unemployment rate can be decreased by working at home. According to the survey, more than 80% of people using advanced technology to complete their basic needs.
Another appealing benefit of learning at home with an electronic device is that it can be learned anytime. Since online classes have flexible timetables, students are more likely to learn. during coronavirus, pupils have to learn through online classes. Furthermore, if youth work from home, they would spend quality of time with their children. If employees work in office, they would unable to devote time for their family bonding. The tribune repressed the survey regarding employees those are working from have strong relationship family and friends as compare to those who visit office in order to complete their work.
In conclusion, given the aforementioned information, although it leads to a sedentary lifestyle, it can be adopted due to its manifold benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...uals of the society think that it leads to few drawbacks for masses, I also argue ...
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Line 1, column 351, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[4]
Message: The verb belong is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'belong'
Suggestion: belong
...its to the society especially those who are belonging to the rural areas. There is a consi...
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Line 1, column 351, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...its to the society especially those who are belonging to the rural areas. There is a consi...
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Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: During
...les, students are more likely to learn. during coronavirus, pupils have to learn throu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, regarding, so, while, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09225092251 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77600178637 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564575645756 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2475521039 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230174529636 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874794213449 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632166562408 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128022171081 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853297441067 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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