It is irrefutably true that the level of stress has been inclining at alarming rate for two decades all over the world. People are facing a numerous health problems due to higher stress level, and a plethora of causes responsible for harassment and some concrete steps should be taken to mitigate this trouble which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
One of the reasons is that higher pressures have to bear in teenagers, Although cutting edge technology has ushered a sea change in every field and blessed with multifarious gadgets such as mobile phone,laptops ,i pad and many more, Mostly these devices are being utilized in order to use social media. For example if teenagers post status on such media, they will get stress if they do not receive some optimistic comment. As well as teenagers have to meet their parents expectations in study which lead to more anxiety. Moreover, working hours in office has been increased in order to live luxuries lifestyle. In others words, employees are spending huge amount of time in office and unable to utilized quality of time with families members who works as a stress buster . deadlines not only enhance harassment but also competitors colleagues contribute in this process n the cut throught competition age.
Some concrete steps should be taken to alleviate this issue firstly, electronic gadgets should not allowed to teenagers by parents who can use a hefty amount of time on these appliances as well as parents should keep a tight vision on the children while using internet. Apart from this, recreational activities can be organized in the office for employees such as badminton and work may be reduced by owner, it can complete before deadlines without getting stress.Last but not least, people should not fall too early in relationship and spend long time with families in order to escalate the family bonding's.
In conclusion, given aforementioned information, it is abundantly clear that stress will not mitigate unless employer and individuals take some steps to overcome this trouble. parents should take an eagle eyes on their child and play with them outdoor games, employees can select small targets which do not lead stress level
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0303030303 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61747423446 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567493112948 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 363.0 20.2975951904 1788% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1826.0 106.682146367 1712% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 363.0 20.7667163134 1748% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 122.0 7.06120827912 1728% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164444028769 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164444028769 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108652098813 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357511856328 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 183.8 13.0946893788 1404% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -296.97 50.2224549098 -591% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 144.9 11.3001002004 1282% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.37 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 25.56 8.58950901804 298% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 147.2 10.1190380762 1455% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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