More and more people claim that modern work patterns are a source of stress. What do you think are the cause of this? Can you suggest some possible solution?

these days, everything is going faster and nobody can find time to relax either at work nor at home and all that leads to more stress on the individual and will creates more problems such as health problems.

To avoid all above, we should find solutions to what causes stress. at work maybe, the employers should make the work environment less stressful by making some facilities available at work such as gym and therapies because this will make the employees more productive and more happier or less stressful.

Another thing is making the workers doing their work during work hours because that will give them more time to relax and more time to spend with families or friends and even to do many things they love and make them feel comfortable and less stress, and that will lead to another efficient work day for them and for the company.

Votes
Average: 2.2 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
these days, everything is going faster and no...
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Line 2, column 162, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'create'
Suggestion: create
... more stress on the individual and will creates more problems such as health problems. ...
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Line 4, column 69, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: At
...d find solutions to what causes stress. at work maybe, the employers should make t...
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Line 4, column 273, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
... make the employees more productive and more happier or less stressful. Another thing is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, another thing, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 703.0 1615.20841683 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 149.0 315.596192385 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71812080537 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21927545615 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 176.041082164 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590604026846 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 506.74238477 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.8655954011 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.75 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.25 20.7667163134 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242072442476 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150583831664 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0143867921679 0.0667982634062 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167721969621 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399208229116 0.056905535591 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 78.4519038076 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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