More and more people claim that modern work patterns are a source of stress.What do you think are the cause of this?Can you suggest some possible solutions?
Nowadays, there are a lot of issues that have negative effects on the humans life style and these problems bring many ruin effects for them. Significantly, one of the important them are modern work patterns, what it is as regards its positive aspects, it has so many negative faces for the people.
Obviously, in the new world, competitions between companies and colleagues are increasing day-to-day. Furthermore, economic problems and people's lake in time management are issues that they are two other causes for this issue.
By contrast, at first, employers should encourage their employees to relax and they should give properly equipment such as gum, sport clubs etc . likewise workers should not do their company's duties in their home to deal with significant decreasing the stress and they should pay attention to manage their time. In addition, the owners of companies should give some facilities to motivate employees for their happiness such as rewards, job promotions and give them in company's decisions, etc.
To conclusion, however this fact is not deny that modern work patterns have a main sources of stress but there are many good ways that cause these stresses declined and in some cases remove from employees' work environment, more motivation, happiness for workers and more efficiency and productivity for employers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, likewise, so, as regards, in addition, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30516431925 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74392587028 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629107981221 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.2183526842 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.25 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.375 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161411195758 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619726430353 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086180062072 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102992279192 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0993556145993 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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