More and more people have pets in their homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having pets ?
It is true that the number of household pets has been increasing dramatically in recent years. While producing numerous benefits, this trend also brings some potential drawbacks.
On the one hand, keeping domestic pets could benefits both owners and pets themself. There is no point in denying that pet animals’ loyalty and characteristic have the healing power, which could relieve stress and bring great happiness for pet owners, especially those who always caught up in their own work and study. Therefore, adopting pets in house is becoming increasingly prevalent in the hustle and bustle in the new era. Besides, raising pets also stand them in good stead due to the fact that pet animals like cats and dogs are less likely to survive on their own in the natural environment, where they have to encounter the difficulties and hazards without any helps from human beings. Consequently, if they are forced to live in the wild environment, then they would easily suffer from diseases or even die unexpectedly.
On the other hand, apart from these above – mentioned benefits, adopting household pets also place those animals and owners at a disadvantage. Firstly, it comes with no surprise that animal themselves could bring many viruses or bacterial diseases, which could harm their owners seriously. Toxoplasmosis, for example, is the disease caused by parasite called toxoplasma gondii, which has been found in warm-blood animals like cats and other pets. Therefore, people could become badly infected if they live together with their beloved pets for the long time. Secondly, many individuals raise pets for wrong reasons such as status symbol or for profit, which could affect negatively household pets because owners themselves could abondon their pets whenever they feel unnecessary to feed them and leave them in the wild environment regardless of many terrible dangers their pets have to face such as traffic accidents with pets or the lack of food and clean water.
In conclusion, raising domestic pets, which is the growing trend nowadays, has benefits and drawbacks for both animals and owners themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...e one hand, keeping domestic pets could benefits both owners and pets themself. There is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26099706745 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65494221995 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58357771261 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.4435066995 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2307692308 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3076923077 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238605787123 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853304298232 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761498154222 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122246370976 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965741349536 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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