More and more people no longer read newspapers or watch TV programmes to get their news and instead read online.
Is this a positive or negative development?
With the development of technology, the news is got access to internet or on social media instead of newspaper and watching tv. Personally, this trend become positive result.
The begin with, people who have habit to keep update the news by reading online, can know quicklier than the others. The reason is that the news can be posted in the internet at any time, beside that residents only watch the same news in at fiexed time. Furthermore, the current news program takes more time to make than writing news and upload on social media. In the covid 19 pandemic the news plays crucial role in human's life. Because they need to update the news everyday to protect themsleves and their family. Thus they have tedency to read online more than reading newspaper or watching tv. Not only that they can also share the information with others by messaging apps.
Moreover, reading online could reduce the amount of paper. trees are the main material to product paper so if the human have habit search informafion online, the number of trees cut down would decline. According to, the quality of air improve thanks to oxi which is made by the process photosynthesis of plants.
Inconclusion, many benefits of reading online that people receive. Not only they keep update the news quicklier but also the environment would improve.Therefore, I claim that it is a positive trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89699570815 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5605166041 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596566523605 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2577364032 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319373157525 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105518132306 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100005440021 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173649394953 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787691272041 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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