More and more people relying on private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problem overreliances on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution
It is a fact that people nowadays wishing to have a private car as a main source of transport instead of public transportation like buses, trams and trains. but there are several other problems which could be created by overdependence on private cars.
Undisputedly, today, earth is suffering from a various climate changes and one of the premium reason of that is carbon emissions and the major cause of carbon emission is transportation.
Individuals today wish to own a private vehicle and it can create traffic problems, air and sound pollution
In an ample research, it has be concluded that sound disturbance can leads to the major psychological issues mainly schizophrenia
There are several ways by which we can tackle with these problems
For example: electric cars can be replaced by vehicles inducing environmental pollution
But the reliable way to minimum the affects of this trend is to use public transportation particularly metros as it's acquirable for everyone and cost is way much less than service it provides
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 168.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23214285714 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06638913821 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 196.911147475 49.4020404114 399% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 219.75 106.682146367 206% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.0 20.7667163134 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184346297181 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101449957013 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385225068193 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761177513089 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426078960316 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.2 13.0946893788 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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