More and more people want to buy clothes, cars and other items with famous brands. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Currently, people have a tendency to buy products from valuable brands. There are numerous reasons for this and in my opinion, this trend will bring about several benefits.
First of all, people tend to purchase goods from popular brands as they will have superior quality when compared with others. Take Gucci, for example. Before it produces a commodity, the company goes through a great number of complex and professional processes from choosing raw materials, designing ideas, creating models and finally, packing. Hence, clothes and accessories from Gucci are of excellent quality and can last for years. Another point I want to cover is that consumers may enjoy displaying their wealth. To illustrate, the high-end products are not only exorbitant but also difficult to gain. Specifically, some need ordering beforehand and the customers are required to wait for a long time to receive them such as hand-made leather belts and natural perfumes from Hermes. Therefore, if a person owns these kinds of valuable and luxurious merchandise., people can know how wealthy he is.
In my view, the dominance of famous brands has some advantages. The worth mentioning here is that this is the opportunity for designers to grow. To clarify, humans’ demands change rapidly, and well-known brands need new designs for attracting their customers as well as being a leader in the fashion market. Therefore, young adults who love fashion design will have more job opportunities to embark on this thriving industry. Additionally, this inclination is a motivation for individuals to earn money. If they want to own these products, which represent success and prosperity in society nowadays, they need to have a generous budget by working diligently. Ultimately, this can serve as an incentive to push everyone to strive and contribute more to economic and social development.
In conclusion, the public has been more inclined towards buying products from famous brands due to their outstanding quality and the desire to show their social status. Although I do not deny the downside of this trend that would cause people to be addicted and spend money without careful consideration, I believe the positives definitely outweigh the negative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31267605634 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81669858425 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63661971831 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7688368438 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2631578947 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6842105263 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234318356384 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062981908981 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362778262571 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141088234619 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317761717546 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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