More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, car and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is argued that prominent label with fashion, vehicles and other things have attracted a lot of people's attention. There could be several reasons for this, and in my opinion, being the owner of famous items have both benefit and drawback effects.
People prefer a stunning range of items for some reasons. Firstly, famous brands with items could meet the demand for utility and modernity. For instance, Apple, which is a prominent brand of smartphone, have launched a new collection of products line to satisfy human's desire. Iphone X is an example, the more famous smartphone gets, the better the utility of the features is. Secondly, some people try to own luxury brand with items in order to let off the steam. They could be cheerful because of its famous. For wealthy people, collecting luxury cars is a hobby and a passion.
In my view, the trend describes above has both benefits and drawbacks. On the one hand, buying prominent label of stuffs will not make you obsolete. For example, there are still old season's look and not suitable for everyone, and famous fashion can overcome that with luxurious and eye-catching designs. On the other hand, being too passionate about buying designer goods, especially children, can lead to a situation where you don't know how to save money. In fact, there were so many children who wanted to express themselves to their friends, they stole their parents' money so they could possess luxury stuff for themselves.
In conclusion, reason for this tendancy vary, and i believe it has advantages and disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97701149425 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53817465098 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628352490421 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0851272974 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73333333333 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180167442009 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583165058237 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327995627255 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961855586422 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413473834842 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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