Computer is one of the most fascinating scientific invention in the history of mankind which completely support human endeavor.However,the majority of folks are using this invention for different purposes such as,working from home and studying.Although,a fair amount of people uphold it as a positive trend while others have reservation about it.According to me,this trend poses more advantages than disadvantages.
There are manifold points which support my view.First and foremost,computer technology is time saving and convenient for the users as workers can do their jobs from home without wasting their travel time.To exemplify,In ancient time, people had to travel a lot to reach the office.Moreover,student can take classes from anywhere. for instance,pupils from rural area can attend the university classes through this technology.Hence,they may get a chance of better opportunities.
Furthermore,this trend also offer flexible hours facilities for men and more desirable chances for women.To illustrate,with the help of computer and technology,women can work from home during late night hours and men may choose the preferable timing shifts.
In contrast,other people hold the notion that computer technology have some negative effects.As people are facing several health issues due to sitting in front of computers for a long time.In,addition,this trend is finishing the face to face interaction among people in society.
To conclude,after gauging both the views,the development of computer technology provide the chances of versatile development and would be a positive approach for the society
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- Some people think that museums should be enjoyable place to attract and entertain young people Other think that purpose of museums is to educate not to entertain Discuss both views and give your own opinion 60
- School should not force children to learn a foreign language To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- More and more people work from home and study from home with the development of computer technology Do you think it is positive or negative development 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.9188034188 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.87285366931 2.80592935109 138% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636752136752 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.5049108551 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 230.833333333 106.682146367 216% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.0 20.7667163134 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.6666666667 7.06120827912 250% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304165561165 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133782733594 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440032078787 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150376079577 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217933679953 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.0 13.0946893788 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.97 50.2224549098 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.9 11.3001002004 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.65 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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