It is fundamental responsibility of parents to take care their children for the better development.However, some folks vehemently conceive,parents must instruct about the right values to their offspring whilst others believe that parents ought to provide a safe environment.There may be merit of both cases.According to me, this statement needs proper scrutinization before forming any opinion.
To embark on,teaching about the right and wrong things would help children to prevent the bad habits in the society as they are vulnerable and can adopt some loathsome activities in their initial stages.Moreover.this trend aid them to become a responsible person in the future and respect their seniors and juniors.Hence,they would behave well and follow the manners in society.Furthermore,Children always obey their parents and follow their instruction as compared to other.As a result, parents may easily encourage them to learn moral values and discipline as these are the essential aspects of every human being lives in the society.On the top of it,Moral values offer a sense of self actualization and ensure about the right things which eventually leads a better impact on child behavior and growth.
In contrast, other people hold the notion that parents must maintain a friendly environment for better pampering of child as children are not enough mature,friendly atmosphere may reduce the chances of stress and mental disorders.A survey conducted by Hindustan times revealed,25 percent of teenagers were found facing several psychological problems in America due to their parental issue like, divorce and daily conflicts.In addition, secure environment would create a better living standard and relaxing approach for children to feel free with their parents
To conclude,After gauging both the views,I opine that both the aspects are important for better development of child and parent ought to maintain a balance between right values and secure environment to grow up for their offspring.
- Some people believe that children s leisure activities must be educational otherwise they are a complete waste of time Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience 67
- Professional workers like doctors nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities To what extent do you agree or disagree
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food To what extent do you agree or disagree with 92
- Online education is becoming more and more popular Some people claim that e learning has so many benefit that it will replace face to face education Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable Discuss both view and give your opinion 75
- Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports Why is it Is it a positive or negative development 92
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, may, moreover, so, well, in addition, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64238410596 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50152059295 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602649006623 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 100.0 20.2975951904 493% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 191.189841664 49.4020404114 387% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 568.0 106.682146367 532% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 100.666666667 20.7667163134 485% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.3333333333 7.06120827912 430% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398610803456 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.251484736311 0.084324248473 298% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0184519853052 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216930066945 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528608170521 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 55.5 13.0946893788 424% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -38.48 50.2224549098 -77% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 43.5 11.3001002004 385% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.62 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.25 8.58950901804 154% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 42.0 10.1190380762 415% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 56.0 10.7795591182 520% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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