Mobile phones has been hailed as one of the most fascinating scientific invention in the history of mankind.Some people uphold this invention as a positive trend while other have reservations about it.However,I will discuss both the aspects of mobile phones in this essay.
To embark on, with regards to positive development,one of the prominent benefit,cell hones are upgrading by leaps and bounds and providing us new avenues while keeping update our self with latest news and current affairs.Moreover,By using this device,people can easily interact with their closer ones around the world .Hence, mobile phones is one the cheapest and convenient communication device Furthermore,People can also mange their work and study through mobiles with the help of internet.To exemplify,During the lock down period,I used my mobile phone to attend my live class at home.Thus,it is an invention which offers tremendous amount of knowledge and help us to enhance our skills.In addition, it also help us to entertain our self and offer numerous amenities like watching movies, listen to music and also connect with whole world by social media.
Having said that, there is also an another side that mobile phones have some drawbacks which are highly appreciable.First and foremost,the excessive use of mobile phones and electronic gadgets create physical and mental health issues as youngsters are spending most of the time with these devices and facing several problems like lack of visibility,migraine and many more.On the to of it,mobile phones emit radiation waves which eventually leads a detrimental impact on our health and raise the chances of having brain cancer and heart diseases.
To conclude, after gauging both the advantages and disadvantages,I opine that people need to use mobile phones according their needs and also try to prevent their children.However, mobile phones are invented to support and facilitate human endeavor.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49163879599 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18023096211 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61872909699 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 74.0 20.2975951904 365% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 247.291831648 49.4020404114 501% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 410.5 106.682146367 385% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.75 20.7667163134 360% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.0 7.06120827912 297% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265431119335 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162526968115 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0208376585338 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162526968115 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208376585338 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.8 13.0946893788 319% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.09 50.2224549098 -24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.3 11.3001002004 295% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.75 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.48 8.58950901804 145% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.6 10.1190380762 312% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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