TRAVELLINGABROAD GIVES PEOPLE MORE OPERTUNITIES TO EXPLORE MORE ABOUT THE WORLD . NOWDAYS ARCHETECTURES IN CITIES OFTEN ANALOGY THE STYLE OF OTHER NATION ''CONSTRUCTION .SOME FALK'' UPHOLEDS ITS A POSITIVE TREND . HOWEVER , OTHER HAVE RESERVATION ABOUT IT , ACCORDING TO ME ,THIS STATEMENT NEED PROPES SCRUTINIZATION BEFORE FERMENG ANY VIEW POINT .
TO EMBARK ON, WITH REGARDS OF POSITIVE DEVELOPMENTS, IN MAJOR CITIES RESEMBLENCE IN ARCHETECTURE , WHICH IS MAINELY TO GLOBALIZATION. THIS CAN LEAD TO LOCAL PEOPLE CAN GET DEAPTH . UNDERSTANDING OF THE CULTURE OF THAT COUNTRY , WHICH CAN BROADEN THEIR HORIZON . TO EXAMPLETY , CHINESS STYLE BUILDING IN NORTH EAST INDIA HAVE PROVIDED OPPERTUNITIES TO INDIAN PEOPLE TO GET EXPOSED TO CHINESS CULTURE. THIS ALSO ELIMINATES THE CAST RELATED TO TRAVELLING ABROAD INCLUDING TRANSPORT AND ACCOMODATION COST. BESIDE THIS MIGRATING PEOPLE FROM THAT COUNTRYBUT LIVING PERMANANTLY IN THIS CITY WOULD FEEL COMFERTABLE AND ACCPTED AS THEY CAN TOUCH THEIR OWN CULTURE THUS MAKING IT EASEIS FOR THEM TO ADOPT TO LIFE . THIS TENDENCY LEADS TO MADE FREINDLY RELATIONSHIP IN HOST COUNTRY WITH PEOPLE FROM DIFFERENT CULTURE .
HOWEVER, THERE ARE SAME DETERMENTEL IMPACT OF HAVING EQUAL INFROSTRUCTURE , EVERY NATION HAS THESE OWN CULTURERAL IDENTITY . SO IMMESENCE FORGIVE INFRASTRUCTURE WILL GRADNLLY DESTROY THE CULTUREL DIVERSITY OF EACH COUNTRY . ON TOP OF IT ,BY ADOPTING GLOBAL ARCHETECTURE ,THIS TREND RISESTING GLOBAL TOURISM AND BOARING CAUSE ALL PLACES ARE BECOMING INDENTICAL , TOURIST WILL NO LONGER INTERESTED IN VISITING OTHER COUNTRIES . MOREOVER , THIS TRENDENCY PUT OFFISPRING ''VIEW ON RISK AS IT IS TO YOUNG FOR THEM TO DESTINGUISH NATIONAL CULTURE FROM FORIEGN CULTURE , A SURVAY CONDUCTED BY NEWYORK TEAMES REVEALED , 60% TOURISM SECTOR SUSPRISENGLY LOST IN CHINA AS THEY MADE REPLICA OF EVERY NATION''POPULER TOURIST ATTRECTION .
AFTER CONTEMPTING THE SUBJECTED MATTER, I CAN CONCLUDE MY VISION ,OBIVISENLY , HAVING A SIMILER ARCHETECTURE FACILITIATE NATION TO EXPLORE DEVERSITY OF OTHER COUNTRY . BUT ,IT HAS ADVERSE EFFECT AS WELL WHICH ALSO COST A LOST TO NATIVE NATION ...
- Some people think that museums should be enjoyable place to attract and entertain young people Other think that purpose of museums is to educate not to entertain Discuss both views and give your own opinion 10
- Some people believe that children s leisure activities must be educational otherwise they are a complete waste of time Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience 67
- These days Internet based courses have become a popular alternative to university based courses Some students prefer this type of learning because they do not need to attend lectures Others argue that it is important to study at university Discuss both th 94
- Advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones in our daily lives 84
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65506329114 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13786314569 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658227848101 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4878861093 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.6875 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210508191684 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665363303727 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585410007362 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108160773564 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712298665745 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.12 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.