It is increasingly common that students prefer to study at colleges and universities overseas, In my opinion, this trend brings more benefits than drawbacks. I am going to delve into both the positive and negative aspects of studying abroad in this essay.
On the one hand, there are some viable advantages of studying overseas. Firstly, students who graduated from abroad universities may get high respect because the overseas qualifications are suitable for many multination corporations. Besides, living in foreign countries can broaden student's horizons, looking at these lives more closely, students can be familiar with other institutions of the nations which they are studying. Lastly, students can immerse themself in the languages in the future with the good skills of these languages they gained in universities, they may work as language teachers.
Despite the benefits mentioned above, there are several disadvantages to study overseas. The most glaring drawback is that students will suffer the culture shock in unfamiliar countries, for example, students must be save all kind of mineral resources when living in Australia, and may get a strict punishment for throwing garbage in the streets, etc. Another drawback is the homesickness syndrome that students suffer from the faraway homeland. Because living in a foreign country, students have almost no relative, they must do everything by themselves such as studying, cooking, even taking care of the heathy when being sick. The last disadvantage is the discrimination of indigenous people against blacks, Asians who can be harassed or attacked by extreme gáng in native countries.
In conclusion, taking into consideration all the aforementioned facts, I think that the positives of studying overseas outweigh the negatives
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, may, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55474452555 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97699278034 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627737226277 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9663352566 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.833333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323001200612 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105118003372 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792116557069 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184062483327 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803258876554 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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