More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country.
Do the benefits outweigh the drawbacks?
It is true that nowadays students are increasingly likely to go to a foreign country for the purpose of studying. In this essay, I will point out that there are more advantages than disadvantages of studying abroad.
On the one hand, an increasing number of students choose to study abroad because of greater opportunities in a particular foreign country. Foreign institutions may offer much better courses and facilities. They can also be prestigious than universities in a student’s own country, on top of employing lecturers who are experts in the fields. Therefore, students can expand their knowledge and gain qualifications to open the door to better future jobs. Moreover, living abroad can help students to broaden their horizons. For example, they have to live and work with other students of various nationalities as well as being exposed to different cultures and customs.
On the other hand, a period of studying abroad can bring some disadvantages. Firstly, living away from home in an unfamiliar culture can cause homesick and culture shock. Students, for instance, have difficulties in talking face-to-face with their parents and relatives, who always encourage them in their lives. Secondly, students find living in a new country challenging because the language barrier can be a problem. If they are bad at foreign language, it is highly possible that they will have problems to find accommodation and pay bills.
In conclusion, while choosing to study in a foreign country bring some benefits as well as drawbacks, I firmly believe that studying abroad is a promising choice in the light of better opportunities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25572519084 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05596507784 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580152671756 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5617607497 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3571428571 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1428571429 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214945370613 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069308590872 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555804395621 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134973954042 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447621733678 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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