More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country.
Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?
Education has crossed territorial boundaries and its importance cannot be emphasized more. Most people avail cross border education in various universities. In this essay I would elucidate the problems they may encounter and discuss the merits and demerits of studying abroad with cogent examples
In the recent era of globalization, the accessibility to various international universities have made the options more promising. Many pupils opt to go to other countries for further academics during which they do come across certain predicaments like learning new language, arranging accommodations, monetary constraints, loneliness, making new friends, workplace adjustments, nostalgia, acclimatization with new climate, cultural shock and sometimes racial discrimination. For instance, many Indian students who go abroad to study are overburdened with financial loans for their studies and they miss the authentic Indian cuisine which is not easily available in those countries.
On the other hand, there are favourable culminations of international study prospects. It widens your horizons, eliminates orthodox views and narrow thinking, gives multicultural understanding and acceptance and helps the student to become self-reliant. Furthermore, it also gives them better job opportunities to progress further. For example, many immigrant students have to work part-time, learn cooking, manage finances on their own. This eventually aids them to transform into matured individuals.
To conclude it is undeniable that the advantages outweigh the shortcomings of choosing to study in other countries. This will evolve and escalate in times to come and education will become omnipresent creating better individuals and opportunities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cook'.
Suggestion: to cook
... students have to work part-time, learn cooking, manage finances on their own. This eve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, may, so, then, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.06504065041 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33114145663 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686991869919 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.7241848589 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188581912305 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595708329373 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634557707489 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101151554099 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256020636708 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.93 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.11 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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