Nowadays, many species are at risk of extinction and zoologists can only support the remaining numbers. Pangolins are a species of mammal that is highly endangered.
First of all, Pangolins are the only mammal in the world to be covered from head to toe in scales. They eat an enormous 70 million insects every year. They are about the size of a small cat, and have long, strong tails that can be used as a weapon. There are eight species of Pangolin. Four are found in Asia and four are found in Africa. Their first problem is that they are killed by some to use scales on their skin in traditional Chinese medicine and the meat of this animal is a very expensive food in Vietnam.
Second, Pangolins are the most trafficked mammal in the world except humans. More than a million being stolen from the wild. The IUCN estimate that a Pangolin is taken from the wild every 5 minutes! I remember I watched a program on television showing that many groups were trying to support this. So, in school and in the all world they introduced this animal to people. Pangolin no self-defense can do, and in times of fear, it will be like a ball, and it will easily fall into the trap. If the more people around the world are aware of this defenseless animal, therefore, more people would love this animal. And when people love something, they strive to keep it alive. And that's the best plan to support it.
In conclusion, with all the efforts of the people Pangolins are on the IUCN red list which is mean, their life already at risk. And we hope the remaining species are taken care of hence, they can reproduce and grow in better conditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...roblems they are facing around the world Nowadays, many species are at risk of ex...
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Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'very expensive food'.
Suggestion: very expensive food
...medicine and the meat of this animal is a very expensive food in Vietnam. Second, Pangolins are ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al is a very expensive food in Vietnam. Second, Pangolins are the most trafficke...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...hing, they strive to keep it alive. And thats the best plan to support it. In con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55161290323 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32898981286 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538709677419 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.1873867128 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3888888889 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195111534766 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533880357469 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614649540971 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973352506276 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594907376889 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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