More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list.
What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
Nowadays a large number of wild animals are challenging with vanishing from the world. I think the extinction of wild species originated in human activities which should be avoided by the responsible organization.
Firstly, climate change is the biggest factors of extinction in animal species, particularly in wild species. Some human activities such as emission of greenhouse gases from factories are caused the temperature of earth increased markedly. This change has a direct effect on the life and ecosystem of creatures like wild animals. Another significant factor affecting wild animals is deforestation in a huge amount in different countries. Logging companies in order to acquire more and more profit are destroying forest more than every time specifically by using new technology and equipment. These activities are devastating and destroy the wild animal’s inhabitant. The obvious example of devastating logging is can be seen in amazon jungles which they are famous as the lung of earth.
There are some practical solutions to keep the wild animal’s life. To cope with climate change, factories can use cutting edge knowledge such as filtering by some Nanotechnology which can reduce the amount of toxic and greenhouse gases considerably from factories. This technology can avoid entering gases to the atmosphere and prevent getting warmer the earth. The solution for logging completely relies on the government. By legislation of some hard regulations, they can tackle these problems. For instance, they can prove a very high punishment such as execution or long time being in prison for illegal logging companies that could have a very positive impact on the reduction of indulgence in logging.
In conclusion, the wild animal's life in peril of extinction by some human activities such as logging and emission of house gases by factories to the atmosphere, these activities should be reduced in order to save the wild animals life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
Nowadays a large number of wild animals are challenging with vanis...
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Line 5, column 714, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the reduction of indulgence in logging. In conclusion, the wild animals life in ...
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Line 7, column 25, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...in logging. In conclusion, the wild animals life in peril of extinction by some hum...
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Line 7, column 223, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...ld be reduced in order to save the wild animals life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40716612378 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99587510456 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524429967427 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7988911665 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.75 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224525272846 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735081093404 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332975706488 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140172539616 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351304447837 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.