More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
In today's world, improving one's health is becoming more debatable, although many thing that increasing the number of sport facilities doesn;t have noticable effect on public health, it has its own individual benefits benefits.this essay will discuss both the points in detail and give evidences on why it is a best way to make use of available sports facilities is superior
there are plethora of ways to step up on maintain a good health through many sport facilities, while one can finish their daily tasks and can have time adjusted to join in required sports clubs to enjoy the facilities and make them fit. such as a Delhi sports club offers 18x7 service will flexible timings and wide variety of sports like football, gold, cricket, badminton, tennis et al. which can be really mesmerizing
But not everyone need not to think on same way,Even though there are some who opposes this by claiming it only helps little on overall people's health and believe extra predominant measures should be taken on top of it. Well in my opinion to clear the dilemma and categorical, making effective use of available facilities is really enough and will have a great impact in public physical shape and be far from any viral attacks
To sum up, this essay discussed the various points associated to improve health conditions by utilizing the available sports facilities and also on opposing group who claims there is only a little effect on public health and more measures should be required, finally provided facts or opinion on why making most of sports is superior
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
In todays world, improving ones health is becoming more debatable, alth...
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Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'many things'.
Suggestion: many things
...th is becoming more debatable, although many thing that increasing the number of sport fac...
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Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: benefits
...ublic health, it has its own individual benefits benefits.this essay will discuss both the points...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... detail and give evidences on why it is a best way to make use of available sport...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... available sports facilities is superior there are plethora of ways to step up on...
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Suggestion: There
...ble sports facilities is superior there are plethora of ways to step up on main...
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Suggestion: Such
...enjoy the facilities and make them fit. such as a Delhi sports club offers 18x7 serv...
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Line 9, column 27, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'think'?
Suggestion: think
...merizing But not everyone need not to think on same way,Even though there are some ...
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Suggestion: , Even
...t everyone need not to think on same way,Even though there are some who opposes this ...
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Line 13, column 308, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the sports') or simply say ''most sports''.
Suggestion: most of the sports; most sports
...provided facts or opinion on why making most of sports is superior
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, really, so, well, while, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9696969697 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52098344953 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 20.2975951904 325% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 193.929594183 49.4020404114 393% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 328.0 106.682146367 307% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.0 20.7667163134 318% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.5 7.06120827912 276% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0769547725142 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426816096028 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256802724396 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0507871850676 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125212851235 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.0 13.0946893788 267% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.95 50.2224549098 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 11.3001002004 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 9.78957915832 623% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 10.1190380762 281% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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