Most countries have traditional celebrations that occurs annually. In your opinion,What benefit do theea celebration have for society?
Support your opinion with examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Almost every country has traditional celebration which has been celebrated for more than a century. Those traditional celebrations are important to be inherited to the next generation, because its benefits on a society is magnificent.
There are many traditions Celebrations which attract the attention of numerous people around the world and even encourage them to experience that. For example, japan is one of the dream destination for people who seek to have unforgettable memories on a new year celebration. Many Japanese visit to fascinating, energetic festivals. This helps young people to participate on a national celebrations which can be inherited to them later. In addition to that, it is great opportunity to embrace their nationality and even to learn about astonishing history behind the celebrations .
In recent years, it is common that many families are living separately, which is one of the reason of cause of isolation of individuals especially elderly people. However, traditional celebrations give those families a chance to take a holiday and reunite. My father who live alone I Japan comes to Sudan once a year to Sudan to venerate Islamic new year. He goes out with his mates and family frequently, enjoys every single second of his short holiday. During he’s return he seemed to be stress free and cheerful which made everyone smile.
In conclusion, traditional celebration has enormous benefits on society and it should be passed on to the next generation. Celebration brings smile and magically kicks out the problem and stress out of the mind. People should enjoy it thoroughly to be away from pressure of life they are fighting against everyday.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'celebration'?
Suggestion: celebration
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Did you mean 'of course' (=naturally)?
Suggestion: of course
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ssure of life they are fighting against everyday.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27881040892 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01572467843 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602230483271 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7004785642 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.6666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167003012527 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581746925237 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550225951713 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114822326442 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616780372102 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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