In most of the countries number of plants and animal species are declining What is causing this What can we do to change the situation

It is undeniable fact that in the majority of the countries many of animals and plants species are endangered. Although it problem has many adverse effect on earth and nature cycle,it can be rectified by various methods.

On the one hand,animals and plants are playing pivotal role to keep maintaining ecological balance and natural food chain balance on the planet earth. In other words,plants provide food to not only human being but also many of vegetarian animals which highly depends on trees and grass. Similarly, animals helps to reduce the population which enhances rapidly, such as reptiles,insects.As a result,the population of forest is maintain under controle. Moreover,tress give oxygen to living inhabitants which is prominent need for surviving on planet earth.

In the solution,there are few measures to handle this situation. First of all, government should implement law against hunting on animal and logging off tress as well as higher authority should be charged huge amount of plenty from the offenders.Likewise,criminal should be jailed for one or two year on animal hunting. To epitome,in India country to save the bengal tiger species indian authority prohibited on hunting and offender will be payed hefty amount of money and he or she will be declared traitor because tiger is the national animal of the country. Moreover,human being should work as a volunteer to save trees and government should organize awareness camp regarding cutting trees with the help world environmental organizations.

In conclusion, while human being demolished the animals and trees from the forest,once day they will be faced many repercussion in the future.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, likewise, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40996168582 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26975074679 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613026819923 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4257749511 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.363636364 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3636363636 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110825428338 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496467505524 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492618488832 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729475111447 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390997113187 0.056905535591 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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