The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Currently，there are quite a few things which do harm to people created by scientists. It is said that scientists should stop doing research as the conclusion found by that would destroy the life of people . Though I believe those seemingly harmful items have its own value，I still agree that the benefit to people should top the list of the purpose when scientist make things.
On one hand，those harmful things was made to improve people living initially, but turned to be used for another purpose which harmed people afterwards. For example，when relativity was first proposed by Albert Einstein who is one of the greatest physicians through out the human history，it was thought to expend the system of theories about
Traditional physics in order to make a great difference to human lives. Then，by contrast，it accelerate the process of making nuclear weapons. Especially in World War II，large numbers of people died
due to those weapons. However，this kind of strategies might not happen in modem society as people nowadays prefer solve problem by peaceful ways instead of launching the war.
On the other hand，I believe it is the rapid development of technology that people living in a world more free and comfortable than usual. Imaging that just a few years ago，people hardly had accesses to reach a remote place，when the quickest transportation was the horses. Now contrast that a person can easily stretch across the pacific Ocean by air within a day. Moreover，science has also extended the life span of people. A lot of drugs as well as instruments for medical treatment came out，as a result，fewer people die from diseases and the possibilities to suffer from another sickness has dropped considerably.
In summary，it is true that developing the technology have risks to harm people，but I tend to argue that it is the science that the life of people become better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, well, for example, in summary, kind of, as a result, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25490196078 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09862911676 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633986928105 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.553711356 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.857142857 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169276500002 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556688139083 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419132551846 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796679948079 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370338322987 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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