Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
Nowadays，more and more people who are good at certain area should get a job in the nation where they got education from. By contrast，some people disagree with that and they think the experts are free to choose the desirable jobs in different area. Although it would make a difference to local economy working in the country where they gain knowledge，I still lean towards the former.
Working in countries where there are better opportunities and resources is definitely helpful for the development of personal career. They can make more use of their talent as the result of more products needed by people there and supports of government. In the end，they would be paid much more than where they used to do their training. As far as I concerned ，however，as this kind of talented people are few in number all around the world and have duty to give a hand to local people and benefit society instead of considering their personal profits.
For local corporations that is newly opened，the people who have their strength in certain area would use their intelligence and creation to make more products with higher quantity. Companies who sell little products would attract more people to buy their goods. Therefore， the economy of the country would be improved a lot. Additionally，with the help of experts，the living quantities of citizens would be better. For example，they people who is professional at medicine will create some incredible drugs dealing with diseases which are hardly be cured though medicine.
Imagine that people who suffered from that kind of disease and have to receive the treatment by hospitals with some expensive equipments which make little effect on them，now contrast with the new drugs helpful for patience to cure their sickness，they would cost less money and
just need to stay at home instead of get to the hospital to get treatment.
To sum up，I do not agree that professionals should go anywhere to work if they like. It is my opinion that there is the necessarity to stay where they gain their skills and work there.
- When new towns are planned it is more important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones Why is this the case Do you think this is a positive or a negative development 61
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use 11
- n some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in What are the reasons for this How can people research this 73
- The most important aim of science should be to improve people s lives To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Suggestion: few
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Suggestion: few
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...cure their sickness，they would cost less money and just need to stay at hom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, therefore, for example, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08479532164 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93504484099 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535087719298 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.0183927125 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.933333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31816932177 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126418145688 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629692007079 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169410961014 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101495432875 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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