Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It has become a belief among people that professionals should work in their country. According to some, it is not obligatory at all for working these people in their country. In my opinion, both sides have rights and it depends on the situation of the society.
On the one hand, the economy of a country is so important and knowledge people who have a special career like doctors, engineers and so on notice it. If the conditions are not good for work and the government does not pay attention to them, these people seek a job abroad that has a very good salary and job security in the future. However, it has a negative effect on the nation because the young generation immigrates to other countries and the rate of the adult population increases in the source country. Exporting specialists overseas causes people who live abroad to get familiar with the source country and go there as a tourist. It is a very good aspect of the import of currency to the country. In addition, the markets, monuments, and other historical places gain much money and the economy improves again. Hence, the economic situation plays a crucial role in that and professionals should have this right to select their job’s location.
On the other hand, the government allocates lots of money for their education and devotes many years to breeding them to a professional person who can do their special career. Thus, it is not correct to work in a foreign country. Controlling the government on their graduated students who are looking for jobs can create a safe atmosphere for them. Not only does it promote the facilities of the country and its infrastructure but it also causes the young generation to stay at home and work side by side elderly generation. But this might have a bad aspect in that they cannot learn new things and experiment with them in industry countries that have high technology. So, the government should set good legislation for this problem.
In conclusion, both insights are correct and depend on the condition and I think the authorities should set a role for their best graduates who have high marks as a job opportunity to work in another country. This rule can help the country in breeding very professional people significantly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 74, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...correct and depend on the condition and I think the authorities should set a role...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, so, thus, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81347150259 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73351789036 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484455958549 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6885592292 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.222222222 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219459358423 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724374442923 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483257019437 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155904735302 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285129801393 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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