You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words
Today, thanks to development of labour market, along with advances in international transportation, there are more overseas work travels among professionals than ever. While working in a country they aim for is a widely acceptable choice, others suggest that any requirements to work in the country they previously underwent a training progress be taken into effect. Personally, I advocate the former perspective, and the essay below will discuss both views, while providing reasons for the author’s personal viewpoint.
To begin with, it might be impractical to require professionals to merely engage in the working environment where they had a period of apprenticeship. Accordingly, throughout apprenticeship, workers have already recognised conditions and abilities adjustable to the environment other countries can create. For example, the majority of Vietnamese graduates in the USA decide to have a certain position in their homeland’s companies, instead of working for the local organisations. The reason for such a phenomenon is the deterioration of work security in the USA compared to that in Vietnam, thus the idea clearly reaches a percept that there should be more flexibility in workers’ selection of working environments.
As individuals specialised in certain working careers, professionals are recommended to select the country for work according to their own decision. This is because they are opt for higher education related to their specialised careers, besides other different goals they can properly fulfill in a particular nation. The instance for this is the case of Vietnamese scholars, where these professionals apply to a range of top - tier international universities and colleges, in order to pursue their career of educating, providedhigher salaries and more competitive working conditions in the foreign curricula. The evidence apparently concludes that there should be recommendation for activeness in the consideration for the environment of specialised carreer sections.
In conclusion, due to negative aspects of the obligation to work in area of assigned job training, the choice of working in a personally preferred nation is the suitable alternative. In the future, as the working market will be advanced, people will carry out the act of working according to their own consideration into popularity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rnational transportation, there are more overseas work travels among professional...
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Line 1, column 381, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...gress be taken into effect. Personally, I advocate the former perspective, and th...
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Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'opted'.
Suggestion: opted
... own decision. This is because they are opt for higher education related to their s...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onal universities and colleges, in order to pursue their career of educating, pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, apparently, besides, if, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1998.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67613636364 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39036562088 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556818181818 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.3590395204 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.692307692 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0769230769 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243408944055 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892067046172 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591823612333 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149218188731 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331756729977 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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