You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The graph illustrates information on the numbers of participants for different activities at once social centre in Melbourne, Australia over 2-decade period from 2000 to 2020.
Overall, over 20 years, the general trend for the participant number was upward, with the peak of the figureheads was for film club. Unlike the former section, the figures for amateur dramatic hit the trough of the whole graph at the end of the timescale.
Particularly, even starting as the summit of the total statistics, at 65 people, the number for film club underwent a minor dip about 5 people, ending up at the same level with that from the first year. Despite starting as the second highest, the figureheads for martial arts were about two time fewer than those for the former activity. The section saw a fluctuation in number at the middle period of the whole timescale, ranging form 30 to 40 participants, that eventually made up to the similar number to the one at the starting point. Only amateur dramatic witnessed the patterns reversed to those in other activities, as its figures insignificantly rose by 5 participants, plummeting to 5 people at the end. The most remarkable growth in statistical data was for table tennis, in which the number started at 15 people, rising to 20 people 5 years later and flattening off over another 5 years, yet accelerating from this point to 50 participants. Mean while, for musical performances, there were no participants recorded at the first five years, the statistics were introduced from 2005, undergoing a considerable growth to a modest level of 15 people at the end of the period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 965.302439024 140% => OK
No of words: 272.0 196.424390244 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95955882353 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93929857329 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 106.607317073 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555147058824 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 283.868780488 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.2311224039 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.888888889 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2222222222 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30020447205 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137558275699 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113611727226 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266862915942 0.15604864568 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127161740033 0.0819641961636 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.