The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
A person who can get better his/her life is knowledge and it is the main aim of science that with it people can improve their lives. I strongly agree with it but today’s people just use understanding to gain money.
In the past that was very hard to learn any science and a few people could comprehend it. All of them tried to use it in their daily lives and if they were fair-minded they would touch to poor people. Not only did educate can to progress and make their lives better life but also never thought to abuse it. Over time more people could go to school and learn science. They helped mankind in different subjects such as medicine, engineering, architecture, etc. Although these scientists did have not enough facilities, their thought was to help people to have a more comfortable life.
Unfortunately, today many scientists just think about money, for example, doctors just see patients like money and don’t care about their health. They don’t any attention to them. It is true in engineering fields such as civil when they must build a suitable apartment, don’t do it and take all of the budgets and give an insecure house to consumers. Anyone doesn’t care about the aim of science which is to help people to get peace.
As a result, there is principal target of science is to improve the quality of life. It is very good if people pay attention to it but today it is not true. Most scientist just want to their personal benefit. I think it lost its meaning although there are many scientists that help people to make their lives better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...uitable apartment, don’t do it and take all of the budgets and give an insecure house to c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as to, for example, i think, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62949640288 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46869798638 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539568345324 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5216757089 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4375 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160513688696 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562579886584 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461512031946 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11359946639 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550089144099 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.