A majority of people believe that Music is the best method to decrease stress in people. I partly agree with that statement and my reason will be shown in paragraphs below.
On the one hand, we couldn’t refuse some merits in listening to music is that music can make people feel more comfortable when listening to them. To be specific, music is a special tool that not only helps people relax when feeling exhausted but also promotes and increases mental health. For example, after a hard-working day, teenagers often use music such as Lofi and pops…. to temporarily forget all the pressures and worries from daily work and relax our mind.. That is the reason why a large number of people use music as a medicine to feel enjoyable.
On the other hand, Relieving stress is not the crucial function of music and I believe that music has a variety of functions that are also advantageous over relaxing. To begin with, music can help people focus more on the lessons, and music is also a form of art which can inpire people. For instance, many young people usually use music as a tool to which they can concentrate on their work, and when no music, they can be distracted and not effective at work. Besides that, Music might seem to the pride of a nation as in many each country, national anthem is often used in special events and presented for the culture and identity of this country. By listen to songs like this can our feeling of pride of a country be raised
In conclusion, from my point of view not only does music just function as a stress reliever but it also helps people focus on work and present cultural functions
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 378, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...often use music such as Lofi and pops…. to temporarily forget all the pressures an...
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Line 2, column 464, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...rries from daily work and relax our mind.. That is the reason why a large number o...
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Line 2, column 490, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...relax our mind.. That is the reason why a large number of people use music as a medicine to feel ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57337883959 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39782892867 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522184300341 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9730827305 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243490349067 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989412644118 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533255643973 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170868614689 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305532370439 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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