Most large companies nowadays operate multi-nationally.
To what extent do you agree with multinational companies have responsibility toward local communities in which they operate?
In recent decades, Globalisation has been bringing many opportunities to myriad of companies, especially corporations, because now they can easily access and operate in other countries. Many people, including me, believe that these multinational companies should have responsibility towards their host countries due to many advantages they get and lot of problems they pose.
That multinational companies mainly operate in developing countries can be highly beneficial to them. First, by taking advantages on the discrepancy in the wages between developing countries and developed ones, large companies can cut down the percentage of their budget for paying worker salary. In their original countries, each employee is often paid several thousands of dollars per month, whereas the same amount of money can pay for ten skillful workers in VietNam. This is extreme cost-effective. Second, since countries like VietNam, Laos have attractive tax rates and easy revenue laws, corporations can have opportunities to get around rules and regulations as they can choose the place to operate. For example, corporations , such as Facebook and Google, often transfer their revenue to subsidiary companies in other countries where they can pay much less taxes. As a result, the main company can save large amount of money.
There are number of detrimental effects which have a lot to do with large companies on the local citizens. In a short term, people have to face with air and water pollution which largely impacts to their health and lives in a negative way. For instance, number of centers of factories discharge many tons of toxic chemical and million meters of waste water into the environment every day. This destroys the around ecology and can lead to cancer or other diseases to local people. In a long term, in order for multinational companies to increase their efficiency, the low-technology machines will be replaced by the modern ones, which makes the host countries become landfill sites of old equipment. In fact, If a area is full of garbage and low-tech machines, large companies will leave and also these sites require huge resources to recover.
In conclusion, I fully agree with the idea that multinational companies should pay a price for not only many harmful impacts they make but also lot of benefits which host countries bring to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25198938992 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8638467305 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572944297082 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1521621738 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.75 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5625 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261519920383 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918891377563 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760595309055 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165325713652 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251907287326 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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