Most people accept that we now live in a globalised world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial.
To what extent is globalisation a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
In my opinion, I partially believe that globalization is helping humanity to evolve and benefit humanity because people from all around the world can support each other and share their culture with others. However, the rise of globalization can also cause fights and chaos all around the world.
Globalization helps people from all around the world to know each other through different platforms, such as Facebook and Instagram. From this, they can know each other better. It creates peace and understanding between different cultures. For instance, there are multiple fan groups such as ARMY and Believer. People involved in those groups can share each other culture and support what they love and create a serene environment. From this, people become knowledgeable and understanding and have strong relationships with people from all of the countries. Nevertheless, there are still some problems that globalization can cause.
Due to interconnection with the whole world, certain people can abuse other people or even countries abuse countries. For example, some nations nowadays are using their relationships with other countries to create wars, because they become greedy and want to impoverish and abuse different countries to become stronger. In addition, cyberbullying could become a big problem. This is a case because of hatred from people who use social media towards others users. For instance, a person could humiliate other countries or people online without receiving any consequences. This creates "online wars" from users on the internet when they fight each other through comments or texts to benefit themself or a group.
In conclusion, although I think that there are certain advantages that globalization could give humanity, such as creating a strong union between people from different countries, globalization could still cause wars from countries to countries or people to people.
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- Most people accept that we now live in a globalised world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial To what extent is globalization a positive or negative development 61
- Most people accept that we now live in a globalised world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial To what extent is globalisation a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowl 56
- Most people accept that we now live in a globalised world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial To what extent is globalisation a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowl 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54421768707 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89351644376 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3611497004 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118582844297 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472713662958 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328220813136 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802951287355 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198509242918 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.