Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In recent decades, global warming due to human impacts such as greenhouse gas emissions, and deforestation,... cause land degradation, air pollution, and water pollution. Despite the important issues, many individuals are careless about its negative consequences. Personally speaking, I agree that the majority do not have attention to current environmental problems. In this essay, I will discuss this topic.
Every year various awareness campaigns are conducted globally, however, it is very long before significant changes occur in behavior. In fact, deforestation has risen dramatically, and numerous species of plants and animals are on extinction. In 2020, scientists announced there are about 5 trillion pieces of plastic in the ocean, pieces of plastic can kill or injure marine and coastal wildlife and degrade the quality of life in coastal communities. this show that people will not pay much attention because it does not affect their daily life.
In contrast, the United Nations has established laws to limit gas emissions, and some developed countries have set up a ‘Regional Carbon Market’ to benefit financial values, except step by step phasing out fossil fuels. Although a range of undeveloped, developing countries are trying to improve their economies, there is no fundamental approach to solving limit gas emissions because of the high cost of tacking. For example, the government will care about improving roads to avoid traffic accidents more than having concerns about the new ozone holes appearing warming way. many countries prefer a progressive economy to protect the environment.
In conclusion, it is widely advocated that many people are careless about the environmental crisis for many reasons which do not affect their lives, or provide economy,...If humans continue ignoring environmental issues, the earth will be destroyed.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-11-26 | Trần Ánh Vy | 84 | view |
| 2024-11-20 | Giang Tran | 84 | view |
| 2024-11-20 | Giang Tran | 84 | view |
| 2024-11-20 | Giang Tran | 73 | view |
| 2024-11-14 | trpg143 | 84 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...enhouse gas emissions, and deforestation,... cause land degradation, air pollution...
^^
Line 6, column 319, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e are about 5 trillion pieces of plastic in the ocean, pieces of plastic can kill...
^^
Line 6, column 456, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...quality of life in coastal communities. this show that people will not pay much atte...
^^^^
Line 11, column 577, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
... new ozone holes appearing warming way. many countries prefer a progressive economy ...
^^^^
Line 16, column 168, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...t affect their lives, or provide economy,...If humans continue ignoring environmen...
^^
Line 16, column 172, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...fect their lives, or provide economy,...If humans continue ignoring environmental ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69964664311 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02245133568 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671378091873 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6172777226 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.214285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154758777788 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474275519057 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055162751128 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932924920468 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457042672948 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.54 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.