Throughout history, jobs were an inevitable part of human life, accordingly, people spend almost half of their lives to working in order to gain more money and social prestige in communities.
Above all people start working at a young age to support their families and themselves. A young girl or boy, for example, after graduation from college and university looking forward to suitable jobs related to their educational degree that they have studied.Sometimes they find a job with lots of duty without a good salary and benefits so that they could not be happy with their job title. In addition families’ expectations is another factor for job enjoyment, a family achievement in a particular subject like medicine always wants to their children choose medical brunches as their features career.
Apart from people's and families' self-satisfaction, ambitious is the natural part of individual life. Obviously, people working hard to improve their lives. For instance, buying expensive houses, cars, jewelry, clothes, etc are the main reason for working so hard so that this desire play an important role in their lives.
Although the work situation or ambitious to live luxury are the reasons for most people to be satisfied with their job, for many people, there are many problems in their workplace or on their profession. As an illustration, many people have to work in some position that really does not like without a good salary, medical insurance or safety like simple workers in the minds and roads. Also, they work to provide minimum income money to living and paying their bills and family expenses.
In conclusion, the work position, salary or people's interest in their job title could be important factors for their satisfaction, however, everybody can not find their dream job in society.
- People spend a lot of money on various things as they earn more money nowadays than before.Is it a positive or negative development? 67
- there has been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. write a letter to your managerin your letter:describe the complaints that hav 78
- Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. they have just sent you some photos of your holiday.write a letter to your friends . say thank them for the photos and for the holidayexplain why you did not write earlier and invit 61
- Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people from poor and rural backgrounds find it difficult to get a university education. Universities have to make it easier, especially for such groups, to get into them.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sometimes
...ucational degree that they have studied.Sometimes they find a job with lots of duty witho...
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Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...d not be happy with their job title. In addition families' expectations is another ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, if, look, really, so, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20136518771 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80302660484 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580204778157 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.3286902945 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.545454545 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32094601912 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130821301413 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556383612115 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195467975454 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318935591813 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.