Most people today are more overweight then ever before. What are the primary cause of this? What measure can be taken to overcome this epidemic?
There is a growing issue in our human society of more people are now having a tendency towards obesity which is the cause of many diseases, especially heart disease. This essay indicates some major factors and and some viable methods should be implemented to deal with it.
There are two main rationales behind the rise in fatness. First and foremost, the sedentary life style is to blame for. For example, the desk workers whose jobs involve sitting most of the day, having very little time to workout thus they are more likely to gain weight. In addition, another reason for being fat is unhealthy diet. Take children and students as an example, due to their passion with fast food, they tend to consume a great number of that unhealthy food in the daily basis, together with the lack of exercises, can lead to the more quantity of obesity they may have.
In order to prevent the effect of obesity, several actions can be taken. On the governmental level, states should facilitate more condition for people to follow. For instance, investing more in some physical activities center especially in the big cities or organize campaigns kindling citizens to do more exercises, restrict fatness and unhealthy lifestyles. Besides, people need to equip themselves with the sufficient knowledge about nutrition and the danger of excessive gaining weight. For example, incorporating nutritious lessons into school curriculums or offering a community workshop about the benefit of the healthy lifestyles
To sum up, it is clear that overweight can be resulted mostly from unhealthy lifestyle and the workout deficiency. Nevertheless, the issue is solved by increasing the awareness of obesity in people and encouraging them to do more exercises.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...This essay indicates some major factors and and some viable methods should be implement...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15901060071 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6954762156 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628975265018 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.1240131108 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.307692308 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161298999691 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525600825084 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322812775979 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103112018975 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313307547104 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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