Compared to the past, people can now work in places that are far from their homes because of modern means of transportation. How has this affected the lives of workers?
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having modern transportation. Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.
Benefits:
work on their best choice with a higher salary
alleviate travel time drastically
recent travel options resulting in a smooth journey
Disadvantages:
many health challenges are faced by the people
Air and noise polution
Global warming
Comuting has been one of the greatest concerns of human being as maintanance of their livelihood depends on comuting and carrying cargoes. Nowadays, the improvements in transport infrastructures made journeys more comfortable and extremely fast. This essay, discuss the advantages and disadvantages of employment of means of transport for human beings.
On the one hand, new forms of transport eliminated barriers of time and distance and also provided comfort in short and long journeys.Firstly, employees can work on their best choice with a higher salary without distance limitations. There are many transport possibilities that are available at the moment like Metro train and modern buses that facilitate employees' daily commute. For instance, many of Iranian people work in industrial estates that are far away from cities. Secondly, another noted advantage is that the recent travel options result in a smooth and safe journey. We can enjoy our selves while travelling from one city to another in a fast speed train.
While we enjoy the comforte of our trips derived from the development of science and technology, we have to realize that some damages on human health and living environment also have been occurred inevitably. Many health challenges are faced by the people due to lack of exercises and physical movements. For example a lot of people suffer obesity and diabeties. Also, buses and cars powered by fossil fuel play a major role in emitting the harmful gases accounting to the rise of global warming. Evidently, Co2 gas is the most important contributing factor to global warming which is the most urgent issue facing the world nowadays.
To conclude, the development of high quality and fast transport system helped us by alleviating travel time and making travelling easier. Meanwhile, it can cause damage to our well- being and the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2077.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42297650131 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90960743618 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548302872063 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.6636943051 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.315789474 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1578947368 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.38176352705 251% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112430214637 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367382134261 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463527161467 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0404540791533 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459624716324 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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