In contemporary years, climate change has become one of the biggest threats to the environment. Many believe that using non-renewable energy should be banned, while other groups oppose to this view and explain this replacement leads to declining economic growth. This essay points out two contrasting perspectives and concludes my view which the latter one should be taken into consideration.
It is true that utilizing renewable energies could benefit the environment in different ways. As most of these resources are more environmentally friendly compared with other fuels, considering them as a first option will preserve our living habitats. According to an article published by Times magazine, 25% of air pollution are produced by cars which burn gasoline and this amount of pollution will be decreased to 5% if people change their vehicles by electric ones. Moreover, due to the advancement of green technology in recent years, there are numerous solutions for different cases and most of them are available in shops. Take the solar panel as an illustration, business developers have produced various panels for different situation and different sizes which enables people to choose the proper option.
On the other hand, there are still some drawbacks of replacing current type of energy with renewable one. First, fossil fuels are much inexpensive compared with other alternatives and then business owner prefer cost-effective options to produce more products and create more jobs. Second, shifting to new resources needs a huge amount of budget to purchase new equipment, that is why factories do not have intention to change the current situation. Finally, distribution of green energies is not effective at the moment and it should be improved to involve it in indoctrination, otherwise factories face frequent issues like lack of energy, for example, charging station points for hybrid vehicles are less than one fifth of gas station in USA.
In conclusion, it is common knowledge that climate change is a big concern in the modern era. Although wide utilizing of green resources could improve the quality of air and there are various ways to make it public, I believe this trend not only increase the product prices, but also decreases the number of jobs created by employer.
- A friend has offered you some work in his company You are currently employed and not able to start for three months Write a reply to your friend In your letter Give details of what you know about his company Explain your current situation Give your answer 73
- Some people suggest that children do not understand the world of works and school should make all teenagers spend a short time working as well as studying academic subjects To what extent do you agree 89
- As well as making money businesses also have social responsibilities To what extent do you agree or disagree 11
- Some people believe that famine is caused by climate change and preventing this will stop famine What is your view of this 78
- Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams like football while other people think that taking part in individual sports like tennis or swimming is better Discuss both views and give your own opinion 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 334, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the number of jobs created by employer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, so, still, then, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28493150685 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82975902209 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605479452055 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1032005251 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.785714286 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0714285714 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173604458766 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578371687566 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359951577457 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962527089607 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151857944719 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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