The movement of people from the countryside into the cities is happening in many parts of the world, resulting in the problems, especially in cities.
What are the causes of this movement, and how can it be reversed
In this ultramodern era, the pattern of migration has been proliferating into rural to a metropolitan city across the globe by which it leads to certain problems in the city. There are numbers of the reasons and solution will be justified in the following paragraphs.
To commence, there are innumerable causes create by migration of rural to city area, the first and foremost one is that lack of job opportunity as well as business sector, in the recent time people are moving into rural to city area because they not only fulfil their basic requirement of family but also complete their financial need. Therefore, metropolitan is the best option for finding a job as well as acquire amenities like transportation, health care and get new ideas as well. Another noteworthy reason is, lack of education facilities in the rural area by which people choose to migrate in city side where they can do study for their children and the desire of their family would be fulfilled in the upcoming time. All parents want to their children to become a well-known person in society with a clean image so this is the best way for the individuals. In the recent survey of British Journal of Education department published one reported that between 2017 to 2018, 23% literacy ratio has been increased due to migration into rural into the city side.
Conversely, the law enforcement authority should develop the rural area and provide all the amenities which have required for people, the government should establish the business in the rural area by which the unemployment ratio would be reduced. As a ramification, if all the requirement available in the rural area than people cannot move into the city side.
In the final analysis, the reflection exhibited with above statement leads to assert that the government should work on the upliftment of the society. If they will not judiciously than the future of the upcoming generation look bleak in the years to come.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... work on the upliftment of the society. If they will not judiciously than the futu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, if, look, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94545454545 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73100754372 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524242424242 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.7659605839 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.363636364 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107503411277 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434882338534 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353375923448 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.060537713752 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382103111951 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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