Gone are the days when people used to heavily rely on local products. Thanks to globalization, now we are able to purchase international goods also, due to the rise of transnational companies in privileged countries. Whether this phenomenon is positive or negative for the underdeveloped countries, has always been a question? In my mind, it have fairly equal side. This essay will delve into both the situations, before reaching a reasoned conclusion.
To embark with, growing trend of multinational companies in less developed countries has a great impact on the employment sector of a host country. This is because, when transnational companies are established in other countries, then there is a requirement of employees to do work in these companies. At this time, nearby people get opportunities to work, and they get source of livelihood for them too. KFC a food-service multinational company is an epitome of this situation. It provides employment to million people in India, who are engaged with different work of the company. So, this is to say that, multinationals have a great influence on employment rate of other nation.
By seeing from different prospective, rising of multinational corporations also have a negative impact on the nation, in which these are established. One deleterious effect, it has to the local market of the concerned nation. The increasing popularity of international brands, and products poses a threat to local products. This is due to the fact that, people often prefer the international brands due to their good quality and durability over the domestic products, which leaves local producers in business loss. Consequently, the local market is in a danger due to the advent of multinational companies.
Having analyzed both the pros and cons of the given topic, it is asserted that although establishment of transnational corporations offers a great number of employment opportunities to people, yet these companies harm the domestic market. So, in my opinion the pros and cons of multinational companies are fairly equal.
- Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.•You should write at least 250 words.•Y 78
- Young people in the modern world seem to have more power and influence than any previous young generation.Why is this the case?What impact does this have on the relationship between old and young people? 67
- Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? 73
- Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past.Do you agree or disagree? 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, so, then, as to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33231707317 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27715256831 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539634146341 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3383213334 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205994592505 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636282333586 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518776107095 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116496703143 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524989602675 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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