Music is the only activity, that has an ability to change the mind and behaviour of human being. Moreover, music is being played since ancient time.
Music is gifted to the human being as divinity. There are numerous benefits of music, primarily, music helps to reduce the stress level and rejuvenates the body. Moreover, listening and playing music helps to enhance the concentration power. In fact, some scientists had proved that listen to music helps to broaden the way of thinking. Music of nature like waterfalls and melody of sparrows are also gifted to people to live in peace without any stress. Apart from that, music is the symbol of happiness as it is played in birthday parties and marriage functions. Besides that, nowadays, music is a good source of earn bread and butter. As well as, doctors also use music to treat the depression disease in people.
On the flip side, youngsters in this modern era, are fond of listening to loud music that can effects the society as they cannot concentrate on their work. Besides that, music is the major cause of accidents as even some people listen music while driving the vehicles. Moreover, listen music out of the limit can harm the hearing power of ears. Yet, loud music creates noise pollution and that is harmful to children and old people.
In the epilogue, undoubtedly, music have more pros than cons. Use in limit of anything is always advantageous to human beings yet over use of anything else effects the health of human being.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...nything else effects the health of human being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, well, while, apart from, even so, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84046692607 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3916765841 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556420233463 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3810566223 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.75 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291465768662 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111885383558 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419119045321 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174138475927 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695099944212 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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