Music is played in every society and culture in the world today.
Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies.others however think that music can have a negative influence
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Music is the mendatory part of our life. It is the graceful blessing that God gave us.If there will be no music then our life become completely boring.Children even old ages person like to listen the music.The essay would describe the whole overview of music nd discuss the views.
It is irrefutable that music comes in the every part of our life.Music plays in every society and in every corner of the world. It gives relaxation to our body nd solve the plethora of problems in our life.It acts like the stress buster in everyone's life.In modern world mostly pupil like to listen the pop music nd old people like listen traditional music.Moreover,this fact is undeniable that music is available in every language nd every culture has their own type of music.Music brings happiness.We all do dance during occasions nd festivals on music and everybody become completely happy.
Moving ahead,according to some people music can have a negative influence on society because they think in 21st century,many wrong types of music can be launched.Children cannot do their study by making the deep concentration. They always the songs on mobile phones nd do not do any type of work.Their intellectual power become weak.Furthermore, employes do not do works in companies.They listen the songs on computers every time.
Overall,we should listen the music because it becomes our body health. But we should listen the music to some extent.Music considered as the medicine of our life nd we can live longer happily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06827309237 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07920841963 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566265060241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.007937248 49.4020404114 253% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.75 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.125 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283306732195 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140979920119 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763568816278 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168685454709 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590644840544 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.