n some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in.
What are the reasons for this?
How can people research this?
In certain nations,it is become more and more popular to do survy on the architects that maintained for a long time. This essay will look at the reasons behind this development and then raise some approaches to put forward the process of research some suggesttions.
I believe this increase in researching ancient buildings by people has several causes. Firstly,nowadays,few number of people concern about whether they would suffer from hunger as the rapid growth of productivity. Therefore,it is reasonable to understand residents in developed countries have cultivated interests and hobbies about the study of ancient houses
and buildings. Additionlly,the promotion of social media might also be a significant issue. Imaging that people used to get messages by newspapers and books where things in history were hardly referred. Nowadays,by contrast,there are large numbers of reports in TV shows,websites on the internet,and such about the story of ancient buildings during hundreds or even thousands of years. Consequently,people get much more familiar with those ancient objects and are willing to know more about them.
Therefore,there are several suggestions for people want to do research on history about those buildings. Firstly,it is a nice approach to go to museums to get close to those old architects. There they can wetness the past of time from those buildings and experience the way people live at that time. Moreover,it is also practical to look through books about previous buildings. Where there are comprehensive introductions about the buildings in history. As a result,people can gain quite more accurate knowledge there than on the internet.
In summary,it will be more frequent for people to know about the history of the architects,and the suggestions are quite useful for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, in summary, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.575 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.60921263108 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6098504098 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439226011932 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124726744698 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738925132871 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232511724485 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411218416318 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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