New parents should attend parenting courses to ensure the growth of their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In these days and ages, there are a number of classes opened to train parents on how to take good care of their children. As moms and dads, they should take responsibility for knowing the essential approaches of bringing up their offspring well. To my mind, I totally agree that it is compulsory for parents to take part in this kind of course.
The parenting courses have a lot of benefits that should be mentioned. One of them is that after joining the class, moms and dads could be equipped with in-depth knowledge about how to raise their children scientifically. At different developmental stages of a child, it requires different methods of taking care. Therefore, parents should gain a deeper insight into the specific methods of bringing up their children at each stage. In addition to this, the courses have an advantage that they provide moms and dads with adequate knowledge about children’s demands and how to comprehend or satisfy them.
Secondly, the parenting courses can offer moms and dads viable solutions which can be adopted in emergency situations. For instance, whenever the child has high fever or breathing issues, parents will be able to address the problems quickly and effectively. As well as this, parents can employ these understanding in guiding their children how to protect themselves from risks so that the children can be gradually used to living independently in the early age.
To conclude, attending the parenting courses is quite necessary for parents to make a good preparation in raising their children appropriately. It is also beneficial for the children as they can receive a sound upbringing from their parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, kind of, of course, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12454212454 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8864561834 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56043956044 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5111250393 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.615384615 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284072471079 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114252667062 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755301191797 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189729667875 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386085502679 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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