A new shopping center is going to open in your town. at present, nobody knows what kind of shops or facilities are going to be provided for customers. what shops and facilities would you like to see made available to the shopping public? give reasons for your answer and make useful suggestions for the shopping center’s management.
The significance of shopping facilities which was always debatable has now become more contentious with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others disagree. In my opinion, the advantages of new shopping mall are a more logical. This essay will explicate how management will provide some useful facilities to the customers in the looming paragraphs.
Analyzing the statement and explaining further the first and most important benefits of the shopping mall is that free home delivery to the customers. If management makes door to door free service, customers will buy more from the shops. Another striking advantage in this regard is that online service for the shopper to purchase different types of consumers from online and pay by any bank cards. In categorizing this it cannot be over looked that the main benefit for this is that getting daily needs from home by shopping malt huge opportunities to time consume.
Moving forward, one of the main underlying reason stems from the fact that it is important to mention that authority should provide different types of items for buyer to buy from one place. Furthermore, top up all bills from shop, would be great advantage for shoppers. Moving on, it is clearly stated that why many people are in favor of the shopping facilities from new center in own town.
In conclusion, according to the arguments mention above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of shopping mall are indeed too great. Thus, I believe that management should take more steps for customers to make good shopping.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'overlooked'?
Suggestion: overlooked
...ards. In categorizing this it cannot be over looked that the main benefit for this is that ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d that the main benefit for this is that getting daily needs from home by shoppin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06563706564 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66173024906 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4465718743 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241798471566 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929237668986 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519041600081 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148026578491 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429161314026 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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