News ha become an important aspect of daily life, everyone is keen on knowing what is happening around them. But nowadays news editors manipulates news according to their interest and benefit and giving more importance to unpleasant news rather than informative or good news.
In the earlier days there was only few news channels and print media, but now thing are entirely changed. There are plenty of channels and newspapers are available nowadays. Public is often get confused which one should they trust, when they are reading or watching a news because of sheer difference of facts presented ...
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The factors that influence
The factors that influence the decision that either the news editor decide what to broadcast on television or what to print in newspapers are: the amount of people they can reach; for example there are more people who watch tv than read the newspapers so they should broadcast on television. Antoher factor is the importance of the message for the editor and how well it is promoted.
I agree that we become used to bad news because they are preponderent on tv, on the internet or in magazines. I guess the reason why they are so many it's because they have a mor powerfull impact on us and somehow we are attracted to this type of news. If more good news were reported the anxiety and depression would be reduced. The television has a big influence on our minds. The bad news influence the vision of the people and make them anxious about the world they live in so, a biger amount of good news in media would change their point of vue and give them a different perspective of the society by inducing a good state of mind by bringing hope.
As the bad news influences the mind of the childrens so do the good ones. They motivate childrens and develope their imagination so they influence the future adults.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...re entirely changed. There are plenty of channels and newspapers are available no...
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... report some incidents. For instance, in India almost all the political parties o...
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...wns a channel also some business groups also. They are all using these channels to i...
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...ublic image or convey their interest to general public. Furthermore, multi national companies ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, if, so, for instance, in addition, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0122324159 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52316744372 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571865443425 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0222041296 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4117647059 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247125482775 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793138218511 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717173668961 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168588936358 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070911457981 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.